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Friday, January 13, 2006

stranger in my mind !!

when evrything dried..
& i was all alone..
with noone inside..
like a cold stone..

then u came my way
& made it all okey..
u walked in to my life..
u danced rite it.
i knew it frm the start
u wont evr quit..

i wanted to fly
u became my wings..
u cant imagine the joy..
things u do.. bring

I dont knw who you are..
but u r always in my mind..
an impression.. just like a scar..
always with me.. like a shadow fallin behind !!

6 Comments:

  • wow!!vish aaj se main teri sabse badi fan!!sachi i am really impressed this time...and the last line is nt luking bad...it has a bful meaning hidden in it.and u shudnt hv removed that para also,it made sense as that is wat exactly happens wen one is in love...or i shud say true love!!best of luck buddy!!

    By Anonymous Anonymous, at 2:40 AM  

  • oye.. koi true luv shuv nahi hai re.. aise hi likh dia mene to.. :P

    By Blogger viSh, at 2:44 AM  

  • hey dat was fundoo man..!!
    n hey y ru hiding if u iiin luv dude..
    shrama mat ;)
    lemee knw if u need NE help..!

    By Anonymous Anonymous, at 10:12 PM  

  • hey 4 got 2 mention my name in my prv comment...
    itz me Anu..!!

    By Anonymous Anonymous, at 10:14 PM  

  • Hey Vishal..
    Good work yaar.. first hand on poetry and itna accha.. It looks like some Bryan Adams Lyrics..anyway its good.. keep working..
    Take care

    By Anonymous Anonymous, at 10:59 AM  

  • :o
    viSh! Ye kya hai ???
    I cant blv ths....U HV WRITTEN THS!!!??
    Nahi viSh..please be kind to other poets...
    Please!
    :D
    -Shubhra

    By Anonymous Anonymous, at 1:30 AM  

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