stranger in my mind !!
when evrything dried..
& i was all alone..
with noone inside..
like a cold stone..
then u came my way
& made it all okey..
u walked in to my life..
u danced rite it.
i knew it frm the start
u wont evr quit..
i wanted to fly
u became my wings..
u cant imagine the joy..
things u do.. bring
I dont knw who you are..
but u r always in my mind..
an impression.. just like a scar..
always with me.. like a shadow fallin behind !!
& i was all alone..
with noone inside..
like a cold stone..
then u came my way
& made it all okey..
u walked in to my life..
u danced rite it.
i knew it frm the start
u wont evr quit..
i wanted to fly
u became my wings..
u cant imagine the joy..
things u do.. bring
I dont knw who you are..
but u r always in my mind..
an impression.. just like a scar..
always with me.. like a shadow fallin behind !!
6 Comments:
wow!!vish aaj se main teri sabse badi fan!!sachi i am really impressed this time...and the last line is nt luking bad...it has a bful meaning hidden in it.and u shudnt hv removed that para also,it made sense as that is wat exactly happens wen one is in love...or i shud say true love!!best of luck buddy!!
By Anonymous, at 2:40 AM
oye.. koi true luv shuv nahi hai re.. aise hi likh dia mene to.. :P
By viSh, at 2:44 AM
hey dat was fundoo man..!!
n hey y ru hiding if u iiin luv dude..
shrama mat ;)
lemee knw if u need NE help..!
By Anonymous, at 10:12 PM
hey 4 got 2 mention my name in my prv comment...
itz me Anu..!!
By Anonymous, at 10:14 PM
Hey Vishal..
Good work yaar.. first hand on poetry and itna accha.. It looks like some Bryan Adams Lyrics..anyway its good.. keep working..
Take care
By Anonymous, at 10:59 AM
:o
viSh! Ye kya hai ???
I cant blv ths....U HV WRITTEN THS!!!??
Nahi viSh..please be kind to other poets...
Please!
:D
-Shubhra
By Anonymous, at 1:30 AM
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